2020.9.3

     Today, I gave advice to two teammates who couldn't practice the last class. I became more and more used to see presentations with critical thinking.

     The first member did pretty well in the presentation but there were some improvement points too. For example, she said, ''There are many opinions but I think'' in the summary part of the whole presentation. I thought making a contrast between negative and positive opinion is indispensable in the conclusion. Therefore, I advised that the presenter needs to summarize the critique too.

     The next member's presentation was full of new learnings for me. I liked how she used a wide range of vocabulary and a summary of the novel was very understandable. However, the presenter had habits of putting hands in the pocket which cease the body language. I believe presentation would improve largely if she wears cloth without pocket, keep on making more eye contact increase, speak in a bigger voice, and make pictures' styles more inherent. Time was longer than 8 minutes and the main cause was the repetition of how the relationship was portrayed.

     Conclusively, I could give some suggestions to my teammates. I hope they use these to do a better presentation. Thank you for reading.